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Lost without you by my side
Up a creek without a paddle
All alone no one to guide me
What will I do
Til you come back to me
Until then I drift along the empty sea
Without an anchor
But I will find you
One day you will be with me again
Forever and always
©2008-2009 ~cleighman
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Um... yea this one and the majority of the ones i have and will be uploading were written a while ago but i finally had time to upload them. but yea comments r nice. Love u.

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I love the paralleling metaphor you talk about. I like the setup too. You talk about the water and then you will flip back to real life and then back to the metaphor. Good job, as always.

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